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Are Cell
Phones Dangerous?
Joseph
Nathe
University
of Iowa
Introduction
If one day
you were told that your cell phone would damage you mentally and potentially
lead to your death, would you believe it? Everyday, billions of people
throughout the world use a cell phone in some form, rather that be through
talking with a friend, on an important business meeting with a company
thousands of miles away, or even just playing some games during yet another
unnecessary commercial break. We can all become so connected with these
devices, that we don’t even take the time to consider what effects these
devices can cause. Due to the cell phone continuing to evolve and become even
more popular, the question that we all need to consider is, are cell phones
dangerous? According
to the latest research from the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration,
in 2008 alone, there were 5,870 fatalities and an estimated 515,000 people were
injured in police-reported crashes in which at least one form of driver
distraction was reported (Madden and Lenhart, 2009). Some of the most prominent
factors when looking into the dangers of cell phones are driving, health, and
academics. However, research would show that there are many additional factors
when it comes to this topic as well. Researchers have discovered that lack of
intelligence, headaches, and distractions are key aspects when studying the
danger of cell phones.
Cell Phones
Affecting Driving
When thinking about the topic, if cell phones
are dangerous, the most common point mentioned would be texting and driving, or
just being on the phone in general when operating a vehicle. Over time, cell phones
have become increasingly important fixtures in Americans’ lives and public
concern over their use while driving has grown (Madden and Lenhart, 2009).
Many researchers (Madden and Lenhart; Caird,
Johnston, et al; Lee, Champagne,
Francescutti) all analyze teenagers, since they are the most tech-savvy, and
show how the dangers of cell phones through texting and driving is such an
issue and how lethal it can become. When using you’re phone while driving,
you’re 4-6 times more likely to get in a crash due to cell phone
conversations have negative effects on reaction time, lane keeping,
car-following ability, and speed control while driving. (Lee, Champagne, Francescutti, 2013). These are all
essential abilities to use while driving. Using you’re phone on the road turns
yourself into a liability that can effect many more people in horrible ways. Additionally,
you’re 23 times more likely to get in an accident when you’re sending text
messages compared to no distractions at all. (Lee, Champagne, Francescutti, 2013). This
information shows that there are major issues with people using cell phones
while driving and people will still continue to text and drive as 73% of
texting teens ages 16-17 have been in a car when the driver was texting (Madden and Lenhart, 2009). The general consensus here
shows that drivers who look away from the road for long periods of time have a
lessened ability to control their vehicles sufficiently(Hosking et al.,
2009; Owens et al., 2011).
While (Madden and Lenhart; Caird, Johnston, et al) study
only the harm that cell phones cause while driving, (Lee, Champagne, Francescutti) studies this as well
as briefly going over suggestions to use your phone and still be a safe driver.
Setting up a caller ID that tells whoever is calling that you’re driving,
turning off your phone when getting in the car, pulling over if an important
call needs to be made, and not calling you’re friends or family if you know
that they may be driving (Lee, Champagne,
Francescutti., 2013). All of these suggestions are great ways to decrease the
dangers that cell phones can cause. By following these few simple guidelines,
we are able to make our lives safer, as well as everyone around us. Even though
cell phones are a high liability when driving, they can also affect our health.
Cell
Phones Affecting Health
When
using cell phones, health is definitely something not many people consider
while they are using them. Through researchers such as (Inskip, et al; Acharya,
Acharya, Raghery; Divian, et. al) headaches, anger issues, and eye strain are
all viewed as minor concerns. However, there can be larger concern as well such
as potential brain tumors caused by the radioactivity found in these devices.
Most of these effects are due to
over usage of cell phones and have been found in specific groups such as teenagers,
the younger generation and college-students (Acharya, Acharya, Raghery, 2013). The
younger generation is exposed the cell phone usage extremely early and this can
even effect children before they are born. Exposure to this so early in life
can be extremely harmful to a young child’s body because these are the main
years of their brain development (Divian, et. al., 2008). The most common
symptom caused by cell phones has been headaches. The headache is caused by
radiation from the phone affecting the skull. Eye strain can also be found
common and if you use a screen for too long you may find yourself at the doctor for pain in your eyes(Acharya, Acharya,
Raghery, 2013).
While (Acharya, Acharya, Raghery; Divian, et.
al.) focus more on common symptoms that can be easily treated, (Inskip, et al)
focuses on the bigger issues such as brain tumors. Some concern has arisen about adverse
health effects, especially the possibility that the low-power
microwave-frequency signal transmitted by the antennas on handsets might cause
brain tumors or accelerate the growth of subclinical tumors (Inskip, et al). While looking at various
cancer patients, we see that even though cell phones could have helped
accelerate the tumor, it was not the initial cause of it. More research is
necessary in order to determine further information. While cell phones do cause
health concerns, they can also case academic problems.
Cell Phones Affecting Academics
Technology
is an amazing tool that allows us to get any information whatsoever in a matter
of seconds. Even though technology is a great source for students to use, it
can also be taken advantage of quite quickly. Research done by (Hoekstra, Wilcox,
Duncan; Froese, et. al) show how technology hurts us and causes us to learn
less due to the many distractions.
With
the advent of affordable digital devices, use of technology by students and
instructors is increasing in college classrooms (Hoekstra, 2009). With everyone
owning some piece of technology, it’s easy to become distracted with everything
that we can get to online. Being in class and analyzing the content that is
being presented is similar to driving. If a conversational cognitive load increases
accident risk for drivers, the same cognitive workload should increase errors
on tests of lesson material presented while students are texting (Froese, et.
al). Hoekstra, Wilcox and Duncan demonstrated a study in which the end result
showed that the average grade on a test was significantly higher when students
didn’t have cell phones rather when they did.
While
(Hoekstra, Wilcox, Duncan; Froese, et. al) show the down side of cell phones in
the classroom, (Gikas and Grant) show how cell phones and technology are highly
beneficial when it comes to academics. As mobile devices continue to grow as
part of the higher education landscape, mobile computing devices present both
opportunities and challenges to higher education institutions (Kim, Mims, &
Holmes, 2006; Looi et al., 2010). Mobile devices provide learners opportunities
to collaborate, discuss content with classmates and instructors, and create new
meaning and understanding (Froese, et. al). Even though there is a possibility
that cell phones and technology can be used poorly, the upside is much higher
and can be used for great things.
Conclusion
There are many factors that can lead to cell
phones being seen as dangerous to us in society. Through various views, cell
phones are seen as dangerous through driving, health academics. As well as many
additional factors. Cell phones are viewed as harmful and quite enjoyable
devices and not seen as something that can cause such harm. While searching for
all this information, when looking for how cell phones are dangerous while
driving, there is quite a gap when it comes to understanding to what extent specific
behaviors and relative lack of driving experience contributes. Additionally,
there is a gap when it comes to research on how texting affects specific tasks
necessary for safe driving. For future research, I would like to see more work
done in the area of being on the phone while driving and finding different ways
to utilize technology while driving. This is a big issue in todays society and
if taken into consideration, could save a lot of lives. If used correctly, cell
phones do not have to be seen as dangerous, rather they can be appreciated for
the great piece of technology that they are.
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My overall first impression was that you have a good rough draft, but there are some areas of improvement.
ReplyDeleteThe first major thing I found was that some of your sentences don't flow very well, or don't make much sense. For example, the sentence "While searching for all this information, when looking for how cell phones are dangerous while driving, there is quite a gap when it comes to understanding to what extent specific behaviors and relative lack of driving experience contributes" could be changed to something like "While researching the danger of using cell phones while driving, I found a gap when it came to understanding the extent to which specific behaviors and relative lack of driving experience contributes" to make the sentence a bit easier for the readers to follow. There were also some grammar errors I found. For example, using "you're" when "your" should have been used. Overall, the paper flowed nicely besides these small things.
Secondly, in the introduction, it was a bit confusing on what the three key issues were. It says "Some of the most prominent factors when looking into the dangers of cell phones are driving, health, and academics" but then it also says "Researchers have discovered that lack of intelligence, headaches, and distractions are key aspects when studying the danger of cell phones" and I found this to be a bit confusing on which three were the key issues.
Thirdly, the ends of your paragraphs could use some sort of closing sentence to wrap up the main ideas and final thoughts. You ended a lot of the paragraphs with a quote and never explained the quote or wrapped up the ideas for that paragraph.
Lastly, some of your citations need some fixing. For example, when you used the citation "(Lee, Champagne, Francescutti)" you left out the year. I found several other places where this was done as well.
Your writing style is so clear and captivating. Additionally, the paper flows really well from one point to another in general. A few things for improvement:
ReplyDeleteIn APA style, you need two spaces between a period and the start of a sentence. Just a small thing to boost that page number I guess.
Avoid using contractions, it is nit picky but it makes the paper look more professional. (Can't -> Cannot)
Again, the overall flow was great. Be sure to summarize the arguments made by the articles you used. The transition sentences leading to the next topic are okay. I do not have any specific ways of improvement other than make them more substantial. Try adding more material to them?
Looking at page three, beginning of the second paragraph: I am unsure if saying "While (Madden and Lenhart; Caird, Johnston, et al) study only the harm that ..." is the correct way of stating what research you used. I would say "While the literature I reviewed study only the harm that...". But, I could be wrong. This may be something to ask Prof. Paudel.
Add the hanging indent on your References, be sure that you italicize the publisher's name and add a comma between the publisher's name and issue number.
There are small things that I pointed out on your hard copy, like formatting, use of words, and the flow of your sentences.