Analysis of Sample Papers

Paper 1:
Strengths: 1)Used the graphs properly
Weaknesses: 1)Not many sources in the introduction
Rank: 5
Grade: D+

Paper 2:
Strengths: 1) Strong Abstract
Weaknesses: 1) Introduction is extremely short, no sources used. 2) Only used one chart  3) Improper title page
Rank: 6
Grade: D

Paper 3:
Strengths: 1) Well-written introduction
Weaknesses: 1) Lack of data found
Rank: t-2
Grade: A-

Paper 4:
Strengths: 1) Used many subheadings to make the paper easy to follow along 2) Good use of charts and graphs throughout the paper
Weaknesses:
Rank: 1
Grade: A

Paper 5:
Strengths: Good use of charts & subheadings,
Weaknesses: Need to be more concise
Rank: 4
Grade: B

Paper 6:
Strengths: Good use of data
Weaknesses: Follow up studies are questionable
Rank: t-2
Grade: A-

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